Could the author have improved the effectiveness of the text had they more consciously considered the above rhetorical principles?

Answer the following: Could the author have improved the effectiveness of the text had they more consciously considered the above rhetorical principles? Or, did they accurately take into account said principles and you believe that the text could not have been improved given what we have learned about rhetorical situations? If this is the case, please explain how/why you believe this to be so, including examples from the subject text that support your claim.
Readable and usable flow through the main parts of the piece including formatting, organization, and other appropriate conventions for this academic genre (see more later).

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