Teachers Feedback: “proposal needs substantial revision, including more content in your background section, a revision of your aims to include some kind of unique contribution + clarify whether or not you’re include an exploration of interventions (I’ve pointed out where there’s conflicting messaging around this in your proposal), and a revision of your methods – especially your search term combinations! Please see attached file for detailed inserted comments on all these points.”
I already wrote the initial proposal but it needs to be revised based on the comments the teacher wrote on it. It needs to be 7 pages long. I will also attach 3 “proposal sample critical analysis” from previous students, to guide you and give you an idea of the requirement and format. Please this needs to be well written, read the comments the teacher wrote on “my initial proposal” and edit accordingly. The previous writer I hired wrote nonsense and jargons, this is my CE paper and it’s very important to me, if you know you can’t write what is being required don’t bother bidding on my paper. You’re not writing a new paper, you’re just revising what I already wrote based on the comment and making the whole paper 7 pages excluding the title page and reference/Appendix page.
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